I'M HERE TO CRITIQUE YOUR WORK ;D
Personally, I think the colours in this are amazing and I love how you captured the sun-beamy thing. Shh.. I'm not technical.
You're just amazing at pictures and this is one of your best. You obviously have a nack for this kind of thing.
Oh, am I supposed to say how you could improve this? Sorry! I guess I would have done it from a slightly lower angle/viewpoint. But that would blare the sun into the picture, so maybe not?
I really don't know how you could improve on something you're amazing at. Keep at it cinnamon girl.
This line is here to make it 117 words, yeah.